[T Hayes]

Hi Robert,

I thought your tone and pace went well with the different sections of this read. My one suggestion would be to pick up the excitement and pace a little on the salsa section. Good luck to you!

[T Hayes]

I thought this was a fun read. Would love feedback on tone and pace. Thanks!

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[T Hayes]

Thanks Brandy!

[T Hayes]

Thank you for the honest feedback. I appreciate it!

[T Hayes]

My feedback reply did not directly attach to your post. Sorry about that!

[T Hayes]

Graceson- First of all, I would say the sound of your voice is very nice and easy to listen to. Your pace is very consistent throughout. To make this sound more conversational and natural you might try varying your pace, possibly talking more quickly in some spots. I totally understand what you are saying about understanding what the read is asking for. I feel like I know this too, but then when I listen sometimes I have missed the mark. I know with more listening and practicing we will both get better at this. 🙂

[T Hayes]

M- thank you for the feedback. Very helpful! I know I need to work on making up a story in my head prior to my reading- work on that ole imagination! I may try this one again with your suggestions in mind. I have never visited Austin, but this makes me want to. 🙂 Thanks again!

[T Hayes]

Hello, previous feedback noted some mouth clicks in my readings. Curious if that is something you hear. And feedback on the pace would be appreciated. Acutally, any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

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[T Hayes]

Toque, thank you for the feedback! I am still new and learning what to listen for in my readings. I appreciated the tips!

[T Hayes]

M – I thought all three sounded great. Your voice has a clear, easy to listen-to tone. I think they could each be used for a different audience. I am curious if when you recorded you were thinking of a different audience as you read. Great work!

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