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Thank you so much for the feedback!

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Good Afternoon – I’ve attached a piece I am working on for my narration reel. I would be appreciative of any type of feedback. Thanks so much.

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Hi – I like how varied your voice is with each piece. I like how you read the first line in the Dunkin spot. In the Pimco copy, I would work on hitting the word ‘bond’ a little harder to ensure it is coming across, as that is what the spot is about. Good Job!

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Hi ALex, There are a lot of short phrases and action words in this copy. I thought you did a good job of varying pitch while going through them. About 5 seconds in, I think you say ‘through sunrise’ or ‘through some highs’, so you might want to work on that piece, but otherwise, it was pretty good. Keep it up!

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Good Day! I’ve uploaded a narration for a travel video on the Mexican city of Guanajuato. I would appreciate your feedback on the read, thank you.

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Hi Steve – Overall, I think your diction is clear and your pacing good. If you are able to bring a little more energy into your reads, that would really up your game!

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Hello – Submitting for first time – open to criticism on these narration reads… still fooling around w/tech. How is my pace? Is it conversational enough? Anything else? Thank you!

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