SuperLuke
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Good recording quality. Was your homework from Art Bruder? I’ve taken a class of his to make sure I have the best recording quality when using audacity. What was the homework, documentary narration? You have a great voice for narration in these recordings!
The Second take was louder: as far as recording quality and clarity. As far as performances: the first take had more of an emotional connection to the audience. Maybe try finding a good balance of both reads by doing a third take, combining the best of both reads?
Great narration so far: recording quality and performance. My concern is the long pause in; ” To visit this area is to spend a weekend in a state of low-key bliss, as long as your idea of a perfect Saturday involves good, inexpensive wine and friendly vineyard dogs.” You had a long pause that breaks off the flow of the narration.
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Hi Mara, what was the homework, practicing commercial reads? The first recording with freshy’s was nice. The words were clear. The enthusiasm was there too. I heard from an instructor that, in an audition, the first 30 seconds are very important: either the words flow together, or they don’t, dependent on the direction you’re given.
Freshy’s good performance and recording quality.
Headache commercial is great: you sound like you have a headache, then you take the pill and then you sound like the headache is gone! Great job
Cat commercial has good energy, well-paced,hope this was helpful
After training with my coach, I will be recording my first demo tomorrow morning. Attached are my 8 characters. I would like feedback about my enunciation, my performances, are all my words clear enough, with and without an accent?
Hear from you guys soon and wish me luckI raised the Gain a little bit via, the engineers request. And I decided to perform it again, staying in the right dB levels, hopefully you can hear everything I say, within the right range.
Please give me feedback on the performance and recording.Good recording. I liked the way you delivered everything. Although, I think you should make the word “Amstel” stand out, like “Amstel light is…”
Thanks for the advice Amber. Yes, I’m in a quiet enough room. And you’re right about the -12/ -6 db thing too. I was trying not to spike in my recording, and I felt more like I was “reading the script” as opposed to performing the Philosophical antagonist. I’ll try it again later, considering your advice.
