SuperLuke
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Hi Audrea.
I liked the copy of the eLearning. You have a nice voice. Maybe work on breath support so that you can perform the copy without unnecessary pauses in between the sentences. I could hear some breathiness and pauses between words at times. I think that can easily be fixed by trying the copy a couple of different ways, like having more emphasis on keywords that the listener of the ad needs to hear. Maybe sound more dynamic, adding some more energy to the copy that can be informative, interesting, and hold the listener’s attention. I’m sure you can find the right pace that works for you.I like how you slated your name and then performed the copy. Maybe add some deeper tone, similar to the “Allstate” guy on TV. Anyway, it was a nice recording to listen to. Keep up the practice!
I would like to thank everyone at Edge Studios for helping me on my journey as a voiceover artist. Special thanks to my coach, Jay Snyder, for teaching me what I need to do for performing animation character roles, plus making my Demo last year. With the help of everyone at Edge Studios, I’ve created a Home Studio, a website, auditioning every day, and I have been shortlisted in 9+ auditions and have earned 18 voiceover roles for 2D and 3D cartoons, podcasts, eLearning projects, and narration for new and returning clients. One client hired me again as the Voice talent, plus being a Voiceover coach for helping other cast members recognize acting beats, + how to bring characters to life, & collaborating as the Assistant Director.
The latest cartoon I performed in is called, “Rooary, the Lion with No Mane”. I performed as the villain, “Rico, the Lion”. I look forward to
That was a good narration. Really heard the deeper register. However, the narrating was slow. Maybe speed up the read a little, make it dynamic, and engage with the listener. Otherwise, they won’t listen to your entire recording.
Hope this helps!
Good job with this performance. I hear honest enthusiasm in your voice, especially at the end.
Keep up the good work!Very good performance. Practice pacing, in case a client tells you to speed up the commercial read(s).
