SuperLuke
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Happy New Year.
I am working on bettering my audition and self-direction skills by performing commercial reads.
Please have a listen and let me know what you think,Thank you,
-LukeHello,
Listening to both takes, I understand that this is an educational presentation, maybe? If so, you are doing an excellent job of keeping the Documentary/ presentation vibe.
My only suggestion is to emphasize the importance of your topic/ keep the listener engaged.Aside from the copy getting cut off at the end I really thought your commercial read was awesome. loved the energy and the voice. Made me want to buy the product!
Mailboxes etc: Your voice is great! The only thing I would do is compare this recording to how it sounds in a raw format. I could hear some Compression or editing in your voiceover file that made it sound a little bit like AI.
Special-K: It sounds like a cold read. Remember to breathe when necessary to give the copy of the read more enthusiasm so that the product sounds desirable.Of course, if it was only meant to be a cold read, then that’s okay too.
Good afternoon Edge Studio Community,
I wanted to share some good news. A client rehired me to be the Assistant Director, Acting Coach, Voiceover Talent, Singer, and Script Editor for a 2-3 part musical. The first was called “Humanoids vs. Robots”. It was a lot of work and I was singing opera-style at the very end, from within my booth, lol! Right now we are working on Par 2 called “Cyborg Mania, The Musical”. I am performing as a Cyborg who wants Revolution, as well as being the Assistant Director, copy editor, Singing 3 songs, Voiceover Talent, and Voiceover Acting Coach for the Cast.
Thank you Edge for all of your help!Hello Feedback Forum,
I am working on my Audiobook Demo and wanted to share some of my practice recordings before a session next week. All input is appreciated!
Thanks,
-SuperLukeHi, ikrani,
It’s a good recording that is well-paced, I can hear your words clearly and understand what you are saying. Were you aiming to do a cold read for the toothpaste brand, practicing reading copies, or was this homework for pacing?
There are some moments when I hear you pause. I’m not sure if that’s because of the microphone or if there’s something in the background.
Anyway, keep up the great work!
