[SuperLuke]

I enjoy the performance. It sounds like a conversational commercial. Great accent when you mention the salsa

[SuperLuke]

If you were aiming for the documentary field, regarding Nero, you might be able to pull it off. Although, you might want to add more emphasis on certain words to show how crazy he was ; “being a perverse, cross-dresser, marrying his step-sister, being the Anti-Christ, burning Rome to the ground”.

[SuperLuke]

I enjoyed this commercial read, nice tone, voice, and the accent gets the listener’s attention too.

[SuperLuke]

This is good stuff. I personally think this fits into a commercial read that talks to an audience. Some commercials are engaging and grasp the attention of listeners, (i.e. how to find the right name for your baby). Keep up the good work and honing your skills

[SuperLuke]

Fun, great vocal quality and performances. My only complaint is a loud noise in the background that needs tuning out.
Hope this critique helps

[SuperLuke]

Aside frim the echo bouncing in the background, fantastic perfirmances

[SuperLuke]

Hey guys! Sorry the volume was so low in my previous practice demo. Here is a fresh version of it that I recorded with the AT2020 at another angle. All feedback is appreciated.

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[SuperLuke]

Yes, I can resubmit this recording. Sorry if you can’t hear anything, neither could I. It’s the microphones positioning and whether I was super close vs. farther away. I’ll fix that and resubmit.
Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it.

[SuperLuke]

great vocal quality and recording so far! Great performance.

[SuperLuke]

Great job with the commercial performance, energy, pace, and more

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