Hey HHarris,
Super silky voice! I’d just say that the name of the company – the one that writes the check – should be solid! The names of both companies flew by pretty fast. Yes, Atl Bread Co –was low. But I have issues with the volume as well, so I can only suggest that you turn up the volume on the computer. New equipment is tricky — can’t wait to hear more!
Hey! This is 4/H take-2! Thank you Nettipo1! I think this is a little better. I’ve added the script!
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The first read was so soothing, I was glad to be an employee! The second read was also soothing, but with a little more energy, I would have been ready to invest! Fabulous voice!
You have a great voice! On the Nutra System and Invisaline tempo could have been a little slower. Remembering what my Coach said, that the product/company name needs to be heard because they write the check. The Animal read started nice and methodical, then it picked up a bit. Still enjoyable reads.
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I liked the inflections in your voice, kept the read interesting. The tempo seemed to have increased in the middle of the read, as it was hard to understand your words. But you have a very soothing voice! Looking forward to hearing more!
Nice voice. JC Penney read could be a little more conversational. I like your inflections there. The Amtrak read was good too! Try putting a little more excitement on “Explore America.” Looking forward to hearing more!