Hey BilBo!
I am captivated by your reads! Your enunciation, flow, tone, pitch — just flawless! You did skip in the second read — “for Justin Boots” otherwise, fabulous!
Hey There!
More practice! Thanks for your feedback, it truly helps!
So this guy I was dating seemed to have it all. Good looks, a great job, a nice smile, and oh…his laugh-so funny! But the truth of the matter is…that smile that started the laugh…ended with bad breath! It seemed the one thing he didn’t have was a Tic-Tac. And I was so close to happiness!
Hey,
Feedback PLEASE! I appreciate suggestions, advice, and all words of wisdom you’d like to share!
Thanks!
The script: Purina One Special Formula For Cats is made with real chicken. Good news for your cat. Great news for your canary. For a complete adult diet for your cat and the real chicken he wants, give him Purina One Special Formula. Your canary will thank you for it. Purina One. Second to none.
O*G! Great reads! I loved the kids — you nailed the ‘no’! Loved the inflections there. The Sandals, well that sounded a little dark. Try a lighter tone for a more inviting sound. Keep it up!
Hey Bev,
I agree with JustJohn that the reads seem a bit fast paced with kinda the same tone, and volume. You have a fantastic voice so just keep on truckin’.