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Thank you so much for listening and commenting! I will work on my energy level — most times I’m so focused on trying be conversational, I forget everything else. I’ve got to remember that this is a multifaceted career! I truly appreciate your suggestions.

[suecat]

Hey Everybody!
I need your feedback on these reads. Just give it to me straight, I can take it — I think! I’m gearing up to record my commercial demo, so don’t hold back!
Thanks!

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MILK
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[suecat]

Hey there,
You have a warm inviting voice. I think just a little more excitement in the performance would entice me to try the lemon pepper chicken, because it’s food! And food is often the center of our gatherings. Overall, good job!

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[suecat]

I really enjoyed your performances! Your voice is butter smooth and easy to listen to. Your intonations were natural conversations. And the meditation, was so very good. I can’t believe you’ve just has 2 coaching sessions, you’re one quick study! There’s a future in VO for you! Nice job!

[suecat]

Thank you for listening and really appreciate your observation! That’s what helps us get better! I will definitely work on my pace and keep my ear out for my enunciation — It’s my lazy southern tongue! Thank you so much!

[suecat]

Hey Everybody, Looking for feedback – help with this read. Thanks for listening and your feedback.
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Hey Sherry,
Your voice is warm and friendly. Your performances were very nice. I could even hear your smile in the Crayola performance. Great work! I look forward to hearing more!

[suecat]

Hey, You have a very clear and smooth voice. I’ll agree with Bev, an increased tempo would make it sound more conversational. In the second performance, I could hear your deep inhale, I guess that’s not a big deal, since they can be deleted from the recording. As we’re instructed, choose the person you’re talking to and why you’re telling them this information, to create that believable conversation. Love your voice, keep posting.

[suecat]

Hey Vern,
It sounded as if you had a different tone for each performance – I hope that was your intent. The volume was very low so I could barely hear you. It sounded as if there was a consistent hum in the mic and your voice sounded a bit slurred. The noise factor skewed your performance. So I look forward to hearing more.

[suecat]

Thank you Mary for listening. I truly appreciate your comments.

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