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Hey Chris,
I liked your upbeat, trustworthy style. I found it conversational and easy to listen to. Just one small thing, your tempo, just a tad too fast. Maybe because I’m from a small, lazy town, I had trouble keeping up with you — but I could play it back. Overall, fantastic job!Hey Community, I’m here again hoping you’ll be so gracious and kind and critique my readings. I am preparing for my commercial demo and I need all the help I can get. Thank you all for taking time to listen and make comments.
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Thank you so much SuperLuke! So grateful you listened and commented. I accept any and all of the help one can give! I will pay more attention to my pace! I’m loving this profession — it’s keeping me on my toes! Thanks again for listening and especially for your critique!
Hey Tamara, You don’t sound like a newbie! You have a very lovely voice. All 3 performances were conversational. You actually make my hold time on the phone a delightful! Your smile shown through on the JC Penny read! Great job!
Hey Community, Please help me out with your feedback. Thank you!
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Hey,
You have that sweet dainty voice. I will agree with Sherry, about the ta in ‘Dove’ – I’m working on that too. Your pauses are noticeable, which makes the performance choppy. Remember to target who and why you’re sharing the information to make your performances sound more conversational. Nice job, can’t wait to hear more!Hey, Your voice was very smooth and soothing much like Godiva chocolate. If you could add just a little more of a sensual expression — like Godiva chocolates are! Overall good performance! Look forward to hearing more!
