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Alexandra, thank you so much for listening and giving feedback. Yes! All suggestions are a great help! I will play with emphasizing different words in other reads. Much appreciated.
Hey, Loved your rendition of prospector and solar! I was ready to get that quick pick, grab my oxygen, put on my seatbelt and blast off! Yeah! But planet earth, had me scared! If that was the intent, Great Job! Keep it up!
Hey, I thought your tone, pitch and volume were spot on — your tempo went just a tad too fast. I didn’t get the feeling that you were speaking directly to one person. As my coach says, find the person, and why you’re giving them the information. Overall, good job!
Oh Don!!! Thank you so much! I will certainly back off the mic, because I used the pop filter, so I must have been just too close! I’ll work on slowing it down! I appreciate you listening and giving feedback!
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Still looking for feedback on narration reads. Thanks!J**k the hero Dog
When the littlest dog in the litter
Takes the biggest journey in Africa
He will make new friends
Face new challenges
And find his destiny.Congaree National Park narration
IT IS A PLACE OF CONSTANT CHANGE. OF WOOD AND WATER, SUNLIGHT AND SHADE. THIS IS CONGAREE NATIONAL PARK.
NOT FAR FROM SOUTH CAROLINA’S STATE CAPITOL, THIS MAJESTIC WILDERNESS OF TOWERING TREES IS A SANCTUARY. FOR WILDLIFE… FOR CHAMPION TREES… FOR VISITORS FROM AROUND THE WORLD.
DAY BY DAY, SEASON BY SEASON, THIS FLOODPLAIN FOREST CHANGES–SHAPED AND RESHAPED BY WATER. A NEW PLACE TO EXPLORE…EACH TIME YOU RETURN..Hey Everyone!
I’m preparing for my narration demo and BOY do I need your help! Here are a couple of reads for you to listen to and share your feedback! Thank you for your help!
AEC Foundation narration
Every child deserves to grow up with opportunities to learn and thrive. With his skills, her talents, each is a potential leader, a contributor, a productive citizen. How kids grow up will determine their success as adults. But sadly, more than one in five children in America are growing up in poor families and poor neighborhoods, where the chance to thrive is anything but a given. The Annie E. Casey Foundation is dedicated to changing that.Narration for Marching Band Competitions
1. (Very polite) The authority would like to remind the citizens to only perform music that utilizes major and minor scales, and to avoid dissonance and improvisation of any kind. Thank you.
2. (Mildly frustrated) At this time, the authority would like to remind the citizens to only play music that was written before the year 1900. Thank you.
3. (Quite Agitated) The authority would like to remind the citizens that the use of complex rhythms and contemporary music is strictly prohibited. Those who continue to disobey the authority will be punished accordingly.Hey Devon,
You have a really nice voice. Your tempo was great, but the reads sounded a bit choppy. Some of your words weren’t clear, example: Misfits ‘at up to 40%’ sounded like ‘add up to 40%.’ Minor stuff. Your volume was a bit low. I think if you find the one person you want to share your information with, and speak directly to them, all of the choppy-ness, if there’s such a word, will vanish! Add that smile in your performances and you’ve got it made. Can’t wait to hear more!Hey Tom, I agree with Mary your enthusiasm was great! Just that ‘introducing’ was kind of mangled, for lack of a better term. Other than that, I really liked it. Keep it up!
Hey Mary,
I liked your performance. I thought that tempo was good and you sound relaxed and excited about your new “family member.” I liked your inflections. Great work!
