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Practicing a more conversation read. I did two takes with two different audiences. I’d welcome your feedback.
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Weelearn – learning through watching.First time with medical narration. Would welcome any feedback. Thanks, Steve.
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Mara, you have a very pleasant voice that I can hear doing these sorts of scripts. I think you could speed up the tempo a little on all three scripts without losing the listener. I think, too, if you took the tonality of the third script and applied it to the first two Delta scripts, it would a little more like you’re talking to the listener. Nice work.
A boy comes running up, and he asks, “What exactly is the ocean? What is the sea?”
You could hit him with a lot of statistics and Latin names, but the answer isn’t something you’ll find in a book. To really know what the ocean is, you have to see it for yourself. And hear it. And taste it. You have to feel its power.Thanks for any feedback. Focusing on travel scripts right now.
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