[Stacey Scarff]

I’ll accept any sort of feedback, but I’m primarily interested in improving the recording quality. Any suggestions would be much appreciated! Thanks!

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[Stacey Scarff]

Hi, Chris!
Nice job! I really enjoyed them. I do think the first sentence of the Trendi one seemed like it was all at the top of your range pitch wise. I think it would be more natural sounding if you brought the pitch down a bit.

[Stacey Scarff]

Hi, Steve! I think overall it’s a nice read. The recording quality sounds good and you sound natural and friendly. In terms of constructive criticism, I think the middle section (“relieving the pain of sore muscles the day after exercise…”) felt a little bit rushed and not quite clear. Otherwise, good job!

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