[smarlowe]

It cut off at the end but I thought you really captured the tone you were going for. Very ‘truck rally’ 🙂

[smarlowe]

sounds great, really energetic and friendly 🙂

[smarlowe]

Hello,
I have my last coaching session tonight and I just wanted a little feedback on my reads. Thanks!

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[smarlowe]

I listened to the Align and Chevy ones. I really like that raspy quality you have to your voice! I liked the Align read, but felt the Chevy read could just be a tad bit faster. Good job overall.

[smarlowe]

It’s a really nice read with a very pleasant voice. I’d personally like to hear a bit more “energy” in the read. It’s a little flat. Nothing too crazy, just a little more.

[smarlowe]

Hello, Looking for any and all constructive feedback on these two commercial samples. Thanks!

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[smarlowe]

You have a great sound and great delivery. The only recording I thought could use some more polish, was the real estate one. The words were just the tiniest bit garbled in that one.

[smarlowe]

You have a lovely voice, very pleasant to listen to and very easy to understand. For constructive suggestions: I’d work on a bit of variety in the reading. It was bit one note for me. Great start!

[smarlowe]

Hello, Looking for feedback on these commercial reads. Thanks!

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[smarlowe]

I appreciated the variation of your vocal pitch. That’s something I struggle with. I thought the overall tone was pretty natural, like someone I’d like to shoot the breeze with.

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