[Silver Wit]

Dang, that sounded really, really solid. Though I will say, I didn’t hear the “r” in the word “crisp.” But sounded good overall. Liked the music in the BG too, nice touch.

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Ok, messed up on the format, but I think I got it right. My first round (part 3) of assignments, any and all advice is appreciated.

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Ok, messed up on the format, but I think I got it right. My first round (part 2) of assignments, any and all advice is appreciated.

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Ok, messed up on the format, but I think I got it right. My first round of assignments, any and all advice is appreciated.

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Ohhh, whoops. I forgot about that. Thanks for reminding me

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I like the bit of personality you had in your voice for the Uber commercial. Also sounds like your pauses are on a good tempo.

[Silver Wit]

Wow. Such a sweet and relaxing voice. Not too many notes to give, but if I were to have one, I’d say maybe take a slight pause before delivering the last line in your Advil commercial.

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Your delivery sounds good to me, but I feel like if you slow down the line “running your own business running you ragged,” it’ll sound a bit clearer. Good work overall

[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part 3). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part2). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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