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Sound quality is excellent. Pleasant, attractive voice. I’m drawn to it. It sounded a bit like a hypnosis, though. Also, after a while, it sounded like you were reading the words, instead of conveying meaning. This *could* be fixed if you work on the continuity, that is, the flow.
Agree with Robert, No.2 is way better than No.1, which sounds sultry, to be honest. With No.2 keep it moving a bit more. It’s got some good pop and upbeat feel.
Nailed it again, Bil-Bo. You kept it moving, impressive, I would have paused too much, me thinks. I’m wondering why you add the music and sound affects here in this forum. It makes it a full professional piece, but is that what we are doing here? I’m not sure.
Hi Mdm, I agree with carynbell, you have a pleasant sophisticated voice. Heck, you sound like a princess! Audio quality is very good, a tad too much with the P and S, but I had to really listen to it. Some of the words and speech need some work: “72,000 acres of wooded hills, deep ravines, and appalacian plateau …. ” should be smoother, and more continuous. You took a pause that was not needed. Same with “centuries old”, it felt like “centuries old” was a separate entity when it’s just an adjective for “Oak and Maple forest” . ” …. socially distanced outdoor activities – rapping, rock climbing, hiking …” are you sure it’s rapping and not rappelling? And “pandemic era” should be era, and not ero.
Hi IMs,
This sounds like it is for an intro to a haunted house at a theme park, or some such. IMO, you put too much character in it, UNLESS the director specifically wanted that. The audio is also not good, there is too much P and S, and distortion.
I like the fact that you changed the stress when you said “doors”. I would try it again, using that change to show that the doors are the most scary and unpredictable thing here.
Looking forward to the next one.Commercial: I chose this one because the subject matter – insurance – sounds like the definition of boring. So, I took it as a challenge to make it sound good. Here is the text I used:
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Call 800-370-3827 for a free price quote. That’s 800-370-3827Hi eg, right at the beginning, I thought I was listening to a national radio ad. Very good. One tweak i would consider, from sec. 18 to about 22 you sound slightly like you are rushing it, and kind of tripping over the words. The effect is very slight, and I think I only hear it because I was listening very closely. YMMV.
