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Doing my best to sound like a normal person who is happy about Mitchum making a natural deodorant that actually works. How did I do?

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Great read. I’d be tempted to edit out the intakes of breath.

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Having a crack at a commercial geared towards kids. Nail or fail?

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FINAL attempt before I open the sodding wine. 😉

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IGNORE THIS ONE!

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Arrrgh file compression issues. :-~ Practicing PSAs for my commercial demo. How did I do?

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I liked the tone and it grabbed my attention. The room seemed to be quite bright with an echo that detracted from your performance. The pause between ‘loudest monkey’ and ‘the howler monkey’ seemed a bit too long. It made the two sections feel separated by a period rather than by a comma.

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Practicing PSAs for my commercial demo. How did I do?

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Hi everyone. I’m practicing some commercial reads before recording my demo. How did I do on this one? Was going for a conversational tone.

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First crack at doing a commercial geared towards kids. Does this sound believable?

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