[rustylj63]

Hello Swy,

I thought your reads sounded great.

[rustylj63]

Hi Kira,
Your reads have good inflection in them, there is a good variance in pitch making them easy to listen to. In your “Always” read, there was a spot that sounded like you might be over enunciating words just a little. When you say: “…alway designed new multipacks…” there is a pronounced break between always and designed. It’s just my ear, but maybe listen to it and see what you think?

[rustylj63]

Hello All,

I have a couple of new recordings and would love to know what y’all think about them.
Thank you,

Rusty

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[rustylj63]

Hi Walter, I agree with Gill’s note about the pace. It sounds too slow I think.

[rustylj63]

Hey All,

I have a couple reads here and would love your feedback. Tell me the truth please 🙂

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[rustylj63]

I agree with what Curtis said. I wonder if maybe it might benefit from slowing down just a touch. Definitely some mouth noises. Sounded good.

[rustylj63]

Hi Gill,
Great voice. I completely understand the congestion… I’ve been struggling with it since October. I liked your reads, but I have to ask… did you edit some spacing out of them? It sounds like you are jumping from one phrase to the next with no spaces in a few places. I can definitely hear the smile in your voice! 🙂

[rustylj63]

Thank you!

[rustylj63]

Hey Y’all,

I’d love some feedback on this read please…

Thanks!

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[rustylj63]

Thank you Gill!

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