[Robert Broussard]

Not bad, try to pick it up a little with your tone.

[Robert Broussard]

Nice voice tone and pace.

[Robert Broussard]

Your voice is nice and clear. But your tone is very mono tone. Try to hit certian words and add some spice to your dialog.

[Robert Broussard]

UCLA
We are UCLA Extension.
We are scholars, innovators, visionaries, experimenters. We are idealists, artists, and optimists.
We have a one hundred-year legacy of taking the unconventional path; the road less traveled. We know that you don’t have to be a student to study. Because we know that knowledge is for everyone and that education improves people’s lives and makes communities stronger. We try and fail and then we try again [slight pause] because we know that there are many paths to success and we are defining our own goals and charting our own course.
[Pace of the VO picks up a little bit] We go into the unknown. We challenge ourselves. We keep rising. We dare to dream. We are here to make the world better. We are UCLA.

I have mixed my first recording with background music. Please give and feedback. Thanks

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