[Robert Broussard]

I think all of them are very good. Good Job!

[Robert Broussard]

For some reason I could only open the 1st on. Your read pace was a little fast and you can work on you enunciation of the words better. It sounded hollow as well in your background. Still you did a decent job. Keep practicing.

[Robert Broussard]

Hello,

That was good. The pace and clarity of you voice was just right.

[Robert Broussard]

Katelyn,

I thought you did each of these well and your voice adapted good. You should not shy away from any parts like these at all. Good job!

[Robert Broussard]

Trying to use a little less accent.

History Channel
If you lived before our time, who would you be?
Would you fight your brother for the rights of another? Who would you be?
Would you find new dreams or create wonders?
What if you could choose from a 1,000 yesterdays; a 1,000 lives, when the past was today and the new took your breath away.
Who would you be? What would you feel? How would you live? Who would you love?

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[Robert Broussard]

Very good Mary!

[Robert Broussard]

I could only download the first one for some reason. But it was awesome. Very good work!!

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks, I will pay more attention to that.

[Robert Broussard]

Both reads were good but the second was definitely better fitted for the content. I think you could pick up the pace on your first read a little and place some emphasis on words that you think should stand out to get your point accross.

[Robert Broussard]

I like it Mary, just keep working on putting more personality into you reads.

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