Robert Broussard
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The second recording was better in my opinion. Both had good pacing etc. But your voice was much better in the Grace Kelly recording. Hope this helps.
Mary, I took the Pauses out a little in editing. I keep getting a comment to two about the pauses in between. But really that is just the way I talk, a little slower down here in Texas. I appreciate your feedback!!
Mary,
Good read, You keep getting better making it flow. Try to imagine you are talking to your best friend telling them about the carpet sale at Sears. That will help up make it more conversational. But good pace, tone and pronunciation.
Trying same script in 2 different styles sort of.
John Deere Shortcuts
When you take shortcuts it shows, we don’t run like that.
We build John Deere equipment the way we always have, the right way.
Times change, our principles don’t.
You don’t just have our work on it… we’ve got our name on it.
That’s how we run.
