[Robert Broussard]

Thanks!!

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks for any feedback. Getting close to working on commercial demo.

Budweiser

I’m just a regular guy who wants the same things everybody else wants, food, family, shelter, friends, and plenty of ice cold Budweiser. Just not necessarily in that order.

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[Robert Broussard]

Thanks, You are right I do sometimes read the words and speak them how I would talk some. I will have to be extra careful for that.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Mary, I appreciate your input. Yes you are right. There was a word muttled there at the end. Not sure why that happened.

[Robert Broussard]

Good read Mary. Very consistent pace and tone. Have you ever thought about reading screen play scripts and acting out a character’s part? I had a voice coach in the spring and she had me play Stanly in “Street Car Named Desire”. Just a thought. If can be fun as well.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Mary!

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks Mary!!

[Robert Broussard]

Everything was good except that last pause at end was a little long. Good work.

[Robert Broussard]

Thanks and have one or two for me as well. 😎

[Robert Broussard]

Brain, both were good. I prefer the 2nd reading. It flowed better and seemed more conversational. Good job!

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