[RetsofNoraa]

Hey all! This is my last homework assignment before recording my Commercial demo reel! These are re-tries of my previous assignment, following the advice given by you guys and my coach. Hope you enjoy!

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And here’s the other half of my assignment, which I forgot to attach to my previous post. Oops!

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Here’s my latest assignment! Going for brighter delivery and more speed control this time around.

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Great start! I love the soothing tone of your voice, and I think you’re finding your niche quite well. For the Advil piece, I had some slight difficulty telling what the first few words were initially; the way you ran them together wound up sounding more like “mussulex” than “muscle aches.” I think this was due to rushing into the next word, since later on you say the same phrase with far better diction. Then again, maybe I’m projecting because that’s something I tend to do often, myself…

[RetsofNoraa]

Here’s my first post! Decided to tackle the Motel 6 script for my first session. Excuse the quality; I can’t hook up my microphone to the iPad just yet, and my desktop computer makes way too much noise to make recording viable.

Currently working on enunciation, but any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

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