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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #84553
    Provocaleric
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    Nice Erik, I think your sound definitely has marketability! I like your thick sound and my only real criticism would be to do more face and mouth stretching, I can hear some binding up at the end of some of those thick phrases, but really nice job! Please feel free to critique me, thanks!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #84536
    Provocaleric
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    Hello Earthbul,
    nice work. I think your voice has real authenticity and I imagined you being apart of the railway industry! The only criticism would be to maybe hydrate a little more, your mouth sounds a little cottony, other than that I’m sure I’ll be hearing you about, good luck!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #84534
    Provocaleric
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    Hello fellow Voice artists! My name is Eric and I would appreciate some honest criticism about this recording. I would be happy to evaluate you as well, thank you for taking the time. One Vanderbilt Observation Deck Audio Simulation. Hello, and welcome to the audio simulation of the One Vanderbilt Observation Deck. Please adjust your audio volume to a level that best represents my voice at a normal speaking volume to a person standing next to you. This will calibrate your headphone level. Please do not adjust your audio volume again over the course of the simulation. Thank you.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #84533
    Provocaleric
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    Hello Leana,
    I’m pretty new to this but I like the sound of your voice! you have a very clear and soothing sound the only negative I would have might be I hear to many mouth noises, I’m sure its just a de click kind of thing, Otherwise I would hire you, good luck!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74974
    Provocaleric
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    Earthbul,

    I do not have a website yet, but if you want to connect with me. Maybe look me up on Facebook and we could start there. Eric Heaps. Unless there is another way?

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74960
    Provocaleric
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    Thank you for your advice, I am struggling with connecting to an image, I have to focus better. I hope your audition went well.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74920
    Provocaleric
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    Earthbul,

    You have a very trustworthy voice and your pacing was beautiful! I admire your patience with the read. Great work! I also took your challenge and recorded Dogs Breath for fun, it should be below. See you on the next one!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74849
    Provocaleric
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    Dear my favorite Edge friends,

    We are gathered here today to listen to this promo! It is from the brilliant archive library of Edge Studio. I would appreciate everyone’s honest brutal feedback, go for it!

    NO
    Kids hate the word no. As in no you can’t stay up late, no you can’t have more ice cream and no, you may not paint the cat. No, no, NO! Well isn’t it time for a yes? We think so. Six Flags Great Adventure. Yes!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74848
    Provocaleric
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    Dear Ilene,

    You have aa sweet voice and energetic style! In regards to your Maybeline lipstick read, I liked how you said It’s what the French did for the kiss, you could even give it a little more. I would maybe emphasize luscious and lips great words to emphasize for s*x appeal. On your Popeyes chicken read, I loved the energy especially you singing at the end! However, I would really ask the question, “Do you have a craven for Cajun?” you know picture someone your talking too! and your Sesame Street read was right up your alley as far as tone goes. If I had to criticize the read. I would Shorten the word “Here” but keep the tone and volume the same. Try to stay connected with your copy, like your talking to a friend or kids watching tv. You are great and wish you great success! Thank you for letting me give you my two cents worth, feel free to criticize me as well, I’m a few pages back.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74847
    Provocaleric
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    Hi Roxy,
    You have a nice and sweet voice, I would maybe hire you for an e-learning or kids book for sure! If I had to critique you, I would say to emphasize plastic at the end a little more and give your read a little more musicality, otherwise I liked it! Keep going for it!

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