[Oktober10]

Hi everyone, here’s my demo! feedback appreciated 😀

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[Oktober10]

Hi there. I love the expression in your voice! I would say make note of how long your pauses are between sentences. Try maybe to smooth it out a tad? If there’s video which these scripts seem like they may be used for, then it makes sense to pause to time with the visuals.

[Oktober10]

AWESOME! I imagined myself in a museum with the audio learning about the work. Great pace and tone and very informative speak.

[Oktober10]

Nice work Mary. I like your authoritative tone however I suggest maybe lightening it a bit, I mean bee keeping is fun right? Not like you’re speaking to a kid, but still with a sense of authority and knowledge. Hope that makes sense.

[Oktober10]

Hi there. I thought your read was great, the pace was good and your intensity and excitement for the product came through. Good job!

[Oktober10]

Hi Leann, I really love the tone of your voice. You annunciate well and have a clear voice. I like the expression in your voice as all. Friendly, authoritative and believable. nice work!

[Oktober10]

LAST ONE I PROMISE!

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[Oktober10]

and, s’more….

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[Oktober10]

More for coaching session……

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[Oktober10]

Hi all, these are for my coaching session but I always apreciate your feedback too! Thanks.

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