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Thanks Erik, I appreciate yr comment, I will keep up the grind..lol

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Hi guys!
Here is my take on the Edge script Gargoyles , I will appreciate your comments thanks

One thousand years ago, superstition and the sword ruled.It was a time of darkness. It was a world of fear. It was the age of gargoyles. Stone by day, warriors by night . We were betrayed by the humans we had sworn to protect, frozen in stone by a magic spell for a thousand years. Now , here in manhattan..the spell is broken. And we live again! We are defenders of the night.We are Gargoyles.

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very candid, I appreciate !

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The name poe brings to mind images of murderous madmen, premature burials and mysterious women who returned form the dead. He is widely acknowledged as the inventor of the modern detective story and an innovator in the science fiction genre , but he made his living as Americas first literary critic and theoretician

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Here is a short Bio narration of one of my favorite writers , My coach wanted me to post some of recordings for critic, help me out guys!

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Hey Mary Good Job, I can totally hear this on radio, I agree with Robert…you are definitely getting better with each post.

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I dont think it was sloppy , the flow was natural and clear.

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Sounds authentic , natural , love the inflections.

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Thanks Kathy, always appreciate yr feedback 🙂

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Thanks Mary, your feedback is always honest , I am truly learning a lot from this forum , I am having tough time with annunciation with my retainer in place. (:.

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