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Hey Ryan love yr character role on the six flag, love it!
For the Bose take, I believe Bose is pronounced Boz!or one salable word without the e
Overall great work!

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hey bil,that sounds neat, i cant find any flaws..its ready for radio..great job.,the instrument was spot on!

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Hi guys pls help critic my work. Thanks 🙂
1.Coors beer
Up here in the mountains … we love Coors Beer.
2.Aetna Insurance.
Compassion and trust … qualities you can expect from Aetna Insurance.
3.Toyota
The 200 horsepower, very stylish Camry, with an interior like you’ve never seen before. Only from Toyota.

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thanks so much i appreciate the feedback

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Yea I agree! Could be better..thanks

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Thanks so much this was really constructive!! 😀

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Great read zhenee, I really like the American Airline read…I felt I was on a plane..I think you are ready to shoot for yr demo..good luck.

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Hi every one , Please help critic my assignment , thanks a lot 🙂

2021 Chevy

The Chevy Silverado Trail Boss
When you have a two-inch lift…
When you have Goodyear Duratrack tires…
When you have Rancho shocks…and an integrated dual exhaust…
When you have all that…
The last thing you’ll need…is a road…
The Chevy Silverado Trail Boss…
Ready to off-road…right from the factory.
Chevy…. find new roads…

Cosmos
Welcome to the planet earth. A place of blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows; A world positively rippling with life. From the cosmic perspective, it is, for the moment, unique. The only world on which we know with certainty that the matter of the cosmos has become alive, and aware. There must be many such worlds scattered through space, but our search for them begins here, with the accumulated wisdom of the men and women of our species, acquired at great cost, over a million years.

BMW.
Luxurious. ….
Inviting. ….
Exhilarating…..
The all new M6 from BMW.

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thanks for this comment , i really appreciate , I wasn’t too sure about this one as well, and i kind of had the same vibes after listening. thanks again

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Hi please help critic my take on edges script , Roses!
Roses prefer a sheltered , sunny spot and well drained soil; but otherwise , these paragons are surprisingly easy going and will suceed in most gardens or backyards . Infact shrub roses will flourish on quite light, even poor soils. It is important to give your roses a really good start. This means some digging. So whether you are planning to plant a single rose or a large bed, it is advisable to double dig so the subsoil is well broken up, especially if drainage is less than perfect.

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