[Michelle]

Hi Brad! Awesome job! I can hear your personality in a big way!

[Michelle]

Hello all! Thanks in advance for the feedback!

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[Michelle]

Good evening! I look forward to the feedback!

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[Michelle]

I love the way that you ended this on a positive note. The beginning of the read sounded a little bit presentational and not very conversational. I’m thinking that the listener that is attracted to something that is “honest” might be more inclined to pay attention to a friend. Great voice though!

[Michelle]

Hello all! This is short and sweet. I look forward to the feedback!

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[Michelle]

Thank you Mary! I appreciate the feedback

[Michelle]

Thank you for all of this! Yes it is true, I recorded it on my phone at my kitchen table. Not sound treated at all! I just wanted to get something out there to practice the read. But I really do love all of the feedback. Thank you for taking the time.

[Michelle]

Hello all! This is my first time posting on here. I look forward to the feedback!

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[Michelle]

You sound great! Very polished!

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