[monibr16]

Very believable accent at a great pace. Good job

[monibr16]

Hello everyone! Here’s another practice read for my coaching sessions, please let me know what you think!Thank you!
-Monique

Kids Activity TV
Every day is an adventure with Activity TV. It’s the place to be for hundreds of Awesome activities in dozens of categories! Cartooning to magic to cooking and more – ready for you day or night. This month learn some gross out magic. Watch closely as Ryan teaches you to perform the severed finger trick!

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[monibr16]

Thank you Daniel!

[monibr16]

Hello everyone! Working on commercial work for coaching sessions. Don’t have a home studio, so mainly focusing on my delivery. Feedback is appreciated, thank you!
– Monique

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[monibr16]

Great reads. I feel like you could have had a little more fun with the first two. Then the third flowed so well. I think you nailed that one!

[monibr16]

Hey Wes, you have a great voice for VO! Good read, but I did hear choppiness with the pauses. Wasnt a clear pause between sentences,then also there were added pauses in a few areas that made the read sound choppy. And I agree about bringing up the energy. But nice job!

[monibr16]

Wow this was all around great!

[monibr16]

Hey Katelyn!
Your voice and energy were great in both, but I’d pick #2. The way you spaced it out and the words you chose to hit helped to highlight the right moments, and follow along with the story.

[monibr16]

Hey Mary,
Great job. I feel like you have a clear audience in mind. It seemed personable. I agree though maybe pick up the pace a tad. But great fit!

[monibr16]

Hey friends! Would love feedback for new practice audition. Thank you!

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