[monibr16]

Hey everyone. FInishing my list for my demo. Focusing on audience, glottal stops, and clarity. All notes welcome!

Coffee mate
(Yawn) There it is, my best friend in the morning. All I need is the rich and delicious taste of coffee mate to help me be me, every morning. Coffee mate. Coffee’s perfect mate.

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Wow, this was great. Pacing was awesome and you didnt hit your T’s hard. Very nice.

[monibr16]

Hi guys! Here’s another possible commercial for my reel, please let me know where I can improve or tweek.
Thank you

Revlon Super Lustrous
Give me a color. It empowers me. Let it be unforgettable, just like me. Revlon super lustrous lipstick. Super smooth, super rich. Now in 91 lustrous shades. Live boldly.

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What a compliment! Thank you so much for the feeback earthbul!

[monibr16]

Thank you so much artist, that helps a lot!

[monibr16]

Hi everyone, I hope your enjoying your holiday! When you have time any and all feedback would be apprecited. Im tweeking my choices for reel. So let me know if they work for my voices, and anyways I can improve my delivery.Scripts below. Thank you!

Gabbys perfect dollhouse
Using your imagination, is the perfect way to create a world of fun with your friends. Gabby’s perfect dollhouse is a proud sponsor of Disney junior.
Additional sets and accessories sold separately. Batteries not included.

Coffee mate
(Yawn) There it is, my best friend in the morning. All I need is the rich and delicious taste of coffee mate to help me be me, every morning. Coffee mate. Coffee’s perfect mate.

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Hey artist7 you had two VERY good takes. Each painting the correct picture with your energy. Crest was upbeat and positive. I could hear the smile in your voice. Where ambien delivered a calm and peacful tone that suited the medical product.

The only not I’d give would be for the crest commercial hit the d in “wider” more. It kind of sounded like you were saying “whiter”. But other thank that they sound great.

[monibr16]

Hi everyone,
It’s been a while but im trying to finalize my reel selections. So how dowes this one sound voice wise, energy and all that? just not technically because I don’t have the best equipment.
Thank you, Monique

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Hey friends, I should have just put these all in on entry. But here’s my last option for my demo. If anyone has time to give me feedback I greatly appreeciate it.

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Hi everyone, have another submission for my demo. All feedback welcome

Dunkin’ Donuts
This fall at Dunkin’ Donuts get lost in pumpkin, with a 1.99 medium macchiato or latte from 12 to 6 PM. Sip in the season today. America runs on Dunkin.

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