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Hi All! Looking for any feedback on this copy. Anything that sticks out to you about the read is helpful. Not in a treated space, so not as concerned about tech notes at the moment. Thank you!

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Hi All! I don’t have a treated set-up at the moment, but any feedback on the read is appreciated! Thanks.

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Hi All! Back with two more reads. Any and all feedback is appreciated! Thanks!

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Thank you both! Really appreciate the feedback

[mcarter]

Hi Thomas! Love how resonant your voice is in this! I would be curious to hear it a bit more emotive at the top, but thought that really came through in the ending. The final call to action felt so specific.

[mcarter]

Hi All! Newbie posting for the first time for my homework assignment. Any and all feedback is appreciated at the moment (though I’m sure I’ll have more specific questions down the line!).

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