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Thank you so much for taking the time to listen to my reads and for the beautiful feedback. I truly appreciate it.
Hi Lauren, You have such a great voice. I enjoyed all three of your reads. Cosmos was my favorite because I love the feeling you put into it all throughout. It flowed nicely. Just watch out for some of the words getting lost in the airy whispering parts if that makes sense. (I too am working on this). Sanjo was great as well, I loved the flow when you first started, however I noticed that you sped up a little towards the middle but overall it was a really good read. I enjoyed all three. Nice work!
Hi ierxyzz, I enjoyed your reads, especially the McDonalds, it was fun, great tempo and flowed all the way through from beginning to end. You have a great voice.
Good Morning Everyone. This is so exciting. I am fairly new to the forum and would love to receive some feedback on my recordings from my fellow peers, Your opinions mean a lot to me and will not be taken in vain. I chose two different spots. One soft and the other more upbeat. Thank you so much in advance.
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NativeHi Ilene. You definitely nailed the Disney read. Nice Job. FOr the Starlight I would just work on the flow to smooth it out little. (which is something I am working on as well). 🙂
Hi There PMuller, You have such a calming voice. Great job on controlling your breaths between your sentences especially in the Allstate one. The only thing I would say is on What is Spark and Allstate is maybe vision that you are talking to someone you know to help your message connect to your audience a little more. (This is something I too am working on). Loved the energy in your Texicon read, Just make sure that energy flows throughout. Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Have a fantastic Sunday.
Hi Jen, I enjoyed your voice you have such a sweet yet relatable voice. I would just say watch your breaths (I am practicing the same thing, its hard but we will get there) and look to smooth out any choppiness ( I too am working on this). Thank you for sharing. I feel like I am learning so much from everyone on here.
Happy Sunday Everyone,
My name is Malissa and I am new to the Edge Feedback Forum. I am not performing on professional set up just yet, however I need feedback on my conversational commercial reads. Thank you all for taking the time to take a listen and comment. I am so excited to see your thoughts. Have an amazing day.
