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Hi ThomasGreene – First read for Advil – good read, your voice is well suited for this sort of commercial. The second read Sandals sounded a little monotone to me; just needed a little more variation in tone? It did not seem welcoming. I liked the third one Freshii the best – it had the most varied tone and pitch and good emphasis on words and excitement about the product. Good reads!
Thank you TimDKietzma, will work on being welcoming and not sarcastic (yikes!). Also I did the recording on my phone as I’m just a few days into the coaching program, but I will be improving the recording setup as I go. Thanks again!
Hi ThomasGreene, I liked all 3 performances, but I feel like the third one for Opti-Green seemed to be the one that was most interesting to listen to, and that I wanted to hear more. I think it’s because your tone was a little more varied on that one, and the words that were hit stood out a little more. Your voice is warm and relaxed and suits commercial well. Good reads!
Hello all! Here is a test read for my upcoming commercial demo. Thank you for any and all feedback!
Functional Fitness
Welcome to our functional training series. Breaking it down, functional training is simply turning your attention to training the body for movements we perform as we go about our daily lives. Movements like standing , sitting, stepping, reaching, pushing, pulling, getting balanced. Our training series has broken down those movements into a series of workouts to help you draw attention to how you perform those activities on a daily basis. This is designed to bring your awareness to your posture and your form, to the muscle groups that allow you to work in those capacities and hopefully keep you safe and keep you strong.Hi RYoung! I liked this read and the smoothness and deeper tone of your voice. The script flowed well, and was understandable and believable. Good read!
Hi kfvoice! I liked the tone and pace of the read, made me want to keep listening to hear more about Mary. Good read!
Hi arwilliamsvo! I really liked the warmth in your voice, super welcoming and nice tone to listen to. I liked all three recordings, good variation in pitch on all of them. The third one on Legos was my favorite, but all worked well for your voice. Good reads!
Hi danvasq4030 – good fit for this read. The pace was good and I liked your warm and relaxed tone for the piece.
Good evening all! Doing my daily recording here for upcoming commercial demo. I’m a newbie so any criticism is welcome – thank you!
JC Penney 6
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