Michele Martin

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #85932
    Michele Martin
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    Thank you Graceson! I totally agree! Am going to try to infuse more “life” and tone variations into the Tilex script and speed them both up a bit. I mean, alcohol may be a depressant, but I don’t want it putting the listener to sleep 🙂

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85888
    Michele Martin
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    Hi Friends-
    Here are two commercial scripts. Open to feedback- thank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85885
    Michele Martin
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    I like your voice Dillon- clear and easy to listen to. I agree with the other commenter to just slow down a touch on “ESPN” so that each letter is clearly enunciated. Sounds great!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85884
    Michele Martin
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    Hi Thomas- I really liked your pitch variations and tone in Chow. Sounds great!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85761
    Michele Martin
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    P.S. My comments were for the whiskey read 🙂

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85756
    Michele Martin
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    Also, I just realized I hadn’t answered your specific question regarding whether a difference between the TJ’s reads was noticed. I liked the overall sound of your voice on the v2 one- felt a little “lighter” and more cheerful to me. The first comment I left on this thread was in reference to the initial version of the Trader Joe’s script. Just FYI 🙂

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85755
    Michele Martin
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    P.S. That didn’t sound to me like a first read! Nice job. Wow 🙂

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85754
    Michele Martin
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    Hi Melody! Love your voice- it strikes me as having a clear and professional sound. I’m sneaking a quick listen from work, so I didn’t notice glottal stops 😉 but I really found you super easy and pleasant to listen to with nothing annoying that jumped out at me :). Ha ha- I have a feeling you are going to be demoted from your queen status soon.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85751
    Michele Martin
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    Hi BJ- I thought the Allergy and Asthma Foundation read was spot on. Your voice has a knowledgeable and trustworthy sound to me, like a smart and warm doctor with appealing bedside manner. I especially enjoy how you utilize emphasis, pitch and tone in all your reads. It seems like you have an intuitive sense of what needs to be emphasized without it feeling like you’re trying too hard, and your placement always feels just right to me. Only edit tweek I might consider would be to reduce certain pauses. I noticed one before “and” somewhere and in another spot I don’t recall without listening again, but that’s it!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #85750
    Michele Martin
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    Hi BJ! On Trader Joe’s, I loved “Who wants to wait that long? Not you” It gave me a chuckle. I thought you did a perfect job infusing it with a hint of humor and familiarity and I enjoyed your interpretation of the entire script: pace, tone, emphasis and intonation felt just right to me, with nothing under or overdone IMO. The only observation I have that might or might not be “accurate” (I sometimes can’t tell if some things are subjective, personal preferences and not “right or wrong”), is that the read felt just a tiny bit tense or formal, as if you were preforming it- for example on a theatre stage instead for a movie, if that makes sense. Subtle and maybe not an accurate observation on my part. I’d be curious if you or others get that vibe or perhaps not.

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