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Lovely read, Nadia! My one comment for the Misty Copeland script is to consider livening the pacing a bit to help the narrative move along. Hope that helps!
Hey Ryan, great read! For the Gamestop one, I recommend smoothing out the pacing. There are some parts that are delivered fast while some parts drag a bit. Getting the pacing to a more natural and even place will enhance the read immediately. Break a lip!
Howdy! I’m currently developing my commercial chops with the aim of recording my demo in June. Feel free to have a listen to these samples and let me know what you think. Thanks!
Commercial 1: Crest
Introducing the Crest Extender. Gentle Extender fibers clean deep between teeth. Now you
can floss daily…extend between. Crest Extender. Fits between to get teeth clean.Commercial 2: Allegra
Seasonal allergies can make you feel miserable. Only once-daily Allegra has fexofenadeen,
for long lasting, non-drowsy allergy relief. So you can feel more like yourself again.
For people 12 and older. Side effects include headache, upper respiratory tract infection and
back pain. Call you doctor now for more information.Great tone, Don! One thing I’d consider is to bring more specificity to your read. Who are you speaking to and why are you telling them this? A quick lead-in at the start is a great trick I personally turn to to help get me into the scene as well. Keep up the good work!
I love the quality of your voice, it brings such light to your read! One thing I’d recommend is to consider helping the copy along with a little faster pacing. Aim for the excitement before a Thanksgiving meal rather than the sedation after it. Great job!
Howdy! I’m currently developing my commercial chops with the aim of recording my demo in June. Feel free to have a listen to these samples and let me know what you think. Thanks!
Commercial 1: Trendi
Trendi.com. It’s the #1 shopping site for top name brands at up to 75% off. Great style,
great value and everything ships free. Trendi.com. Everything you love, for less.Commercial 2: Vigoro Ultra
Vigoro Ultra greens your lawn in 72 hours and lasts up to three months. It’s the same
technology used to keep Arnold Palmer’s Bay Hill club in championship shape. You’ll find
Vigoro Ultra at The Home Depot.Nice natural read! Maybe consider emphasizing the benefits, like “just $51 dollars/waive…/free…” to highlight why the listener should take action now with this offer rather than wait for another time to consider it.
Hey there, sounds like a fun read! I’m assuming it’s for some animation work, or possibly a children’s audiobook? Defining the intended use will help in directing your delivery to make sure it’s format-appropriate. You definitely sound like you have the ability to voice work aimed at a younger audience, so kudos there!
