[marioh5]

Happy Halloween all! I am close to recording my demo and I would be grateful for any and all feedback for the attached recordings, I hope y’all are having a great day and thanks for the help!

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[marioh5]

Hi Thomas, you have a nice voice, perhaps just a bit more emotion in your reads, the biggest takeaway is Jaguar, your recording got cut off perhaps in editing about 1/3 in, also check the correct pronunciation of Jaguar although there seems to be a differing of opinions but I would check an ad to try and match the pronunciation as done on ads, good luck!

[marioh5]

Hey Thomas, thanks for the feedback, super helpful!

[marioh5]

Greetings, I have 2 recordings that I would love some feedback on as I continue my journey to my demo. Thanks for the help!

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[marioh5]

Thank you! Great feedback, especially pointing out mispronouncing words, good stuff!

[marioh5]

Excellent feedback, just what I need!

[marioh5]

Thanks for the feedback! Very useful and on point!

[marioh5]

Hi all! I’m looking for feedback for my 1st practice recording, any & all feedback is greatly appreciated!

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