mara_sherman
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Hello everyone! Here are some commercial scripts I practiced for homework. Thanks for all the feedback!
Great job! I think you sound very conversational and not presentational at all. I think you could have had even more fun with the Cellular One read, maybe just add bit of a different character to each of the facts. Fantastic work!
Your voice sounds great, it’s really warm and inviting and you have great pitch variation. My only critique is that there are some pauses you could do without, and maybe just a little bit more excitement. Awesome job!
Hello! Here are some Narration practice scripts I worked on for homework. Thanks in advance for your feedbacK!
Hi everyone! Here are some Commercial scripts I recorded for homework. Thanks so much for all of your feedback!
Your voice sounds great and the tone is well suited on both reads, but they’re both a little fast- try slowing them down just a bit. Also maybe just add a touch more excitement into Dave’s night out. Great job!
I think you have a great voice and the right idea with this script, it just needs a little finesse. You start off nice and slow and relaxing, and then kind of speed up and take us out of the relaxation. Try keeping it at the same chill pace throughout and use pitch modification to highlight what’s relaxing about Bermuda. Look up some pictures of Bermuda beaches to get you in that mindset and try reading it at a moderately slow pace throughout and I think it will naturally come out really nicely from your voice and natural inflection.
Great job! You sound very clear and genuine, and did a wonderful job painting a picture with your voice.
Hi Steve! You sound great, very clear and the recording sounded pro. I would just add a bit more chocolatey sweetness to highlight certain parts maybe to add a little more differentiation. Awesome job!
