[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, hope you are having a great start to the week! I have another narration practice read that I would very much appreciate any feedback on. Thank you in advance and Happy Halloween!

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[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, I have a narration practice read that I would love some feedback on!
Thank you and I hope you all have a great week!

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[madtrammell]

Great work! Regarding your TVA read, I would suggest slowing down the read just a bit to avoid sounding rushed

[madtrammell]

You have a very nice voice for commercials! Sounds like you’re ready to take the next step!

[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, I have another attempt at narration practice for my upcoming demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, have a great weekend!

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[madtrammell]

Good work! My only comment would be on your second read to slow down your pacing just a tad to avoid sounding rushed

[madtrammell]

I think the third take is great!

[madtrammell]

Great diction and pacing on both reads!

[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, I have another practice attempt in preparation for my upcoming narration demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you!

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[madtrammell]

You have a very good voice for this read! I would say try to vary your performance a bit through the read, to give it a bit more energy

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