Luke V
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Thank you for the feedback. In addition to the words sounding muffled and keeping clarity, I was recently told that I should work on my consonants (i.e. b, f, t) as well to make them more more precise. I’ll definitely be mindful of your comment for my next recordings.
Hey, fellow aspiring voice actors!
If it’s not too much trouble, I would really appreciate any and all feedback even if it’s harsh. I’m not very happy with how these turned out, but I figured I’d never post and learn anything if I try to be happy. That, or I’d strain my voice. Thank you in advance.
Your smooth and relaxing read reminded of an ad for a diamond jeweler store called Shane Co. I would hear it growing up and always found it soothing. The read starts with “peace” and it definitely carries that tone all throughout. Great job!
I’m right there with you on PCs making too much noise. Currently trying to find an alternative myself.
Concerning the recording, if your focus is enunciation, I highly recommend “stretching” your voice by doing lip trills or even just taking a half-filled bottle of water and blowing bubbles with a straw. Doing so helps you build up breath energy that makes your words sound more lively, impactful, and clear. Overall, I thought the read was quite natural and conversational.
I love the consistency you have concerning the volume and tempo. I don’t know if it was intentional, but I also love the subtle change to a slightly higher pitch at 43 seconds in the mp3 when reading “height”. Overall, it was very informative and digestible.
I really liked how all three had their own clear tones. It also sounded like they were carefully balanced to keep the conversational nature of the read. That was awesome.
