[Libby Ronon]

Hi! I’m looking for feedback on anything and everything except recording quality, as I do not yet have a home studio. Let me know what you think!

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[Libby Ronon]

Incredible job! I thought all of them were great (particularly Cancun and Podium). If I’m being picky, I would say that that the first 10 seconds of Annie E. Casey could be a little more conversational and with less gaps between each list item. I think you’re valuing the right words, but I wasn’t quite sure how the sentence was structured until I saw the script. Otherwise, they were wonderful!

[Libby Ronon]

Woah! This is great! I agree with RYoung, but I think this is a wonderful demo (and so awesome that it’s your first!)

[Libby Ronon]

Nice job! I think you can make your pauses between “shaving” and “blades” as well as “also” and “cooling” a millisecond shorter while still respecting the punctuation. I loved “Oooh, I got goosebumps.”

[Libby Ronon]

Hi, all!

This is my first time using the Feedback Forum! I would appreciate any critiques and suggestions regarding my technique, as I do not yet have a home studio (I’m recording off of my phone). Thank you so much!

Kindly,
Libby

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