The obvious note of treatment but I totally understand. Maybe throw a blanket over you or some pillows around the mic to take away some of the echo? Your tone is very full! I also like the punch you had at the end for the tag. Awesome work!
You sound like you really believe in the product! I will say that it sounds a bit choppy in places like they were part of different takes and you had put them together since there are strange pauses before or after phrases. The tone was very warm, and the volume was PERFECT. Great job!
These takes sound awesome! Really had a professional feel to the read and your volume and pacing are what really grab my attention and peak my ears. Hats off to you!
The Mrs. Dash read sounded GREAT! I would like the volume to be bumped up just a little more, maybe too far from the mic? This was a more conversational flowy read that I tend to lead to and causes me to remember easier so that’s awesome! I would just punch the end a bit more since you are talking about the website. Other than that, fantastic read!
I definitely got a vacation vibe from this take! I will say, the pacing could be bumped up maybe a half speed but that feel is VERY MUCH THERE. Like Artist7 said, the ending of some words did drop off so just a little practice on that would help make this read. Overall, great job!
For Excedrin, I would say to slow down. The pacing was pretty fast and I jarring. Felt like one big sentence. Plosives weren’t noticeable so that’s a plus!
This was so nice to listen to! I will say, the sound was a bit low, so maybe it was the recording, or you were too far away from the mic? Either way, the pacing and infliction was convincing and made me want to hop on the website right then and there!
Documentary on Jazz sounded really smooth! The pacing for it was stable as well. I will say that the s’s were noticeable in the beginning but toned down throughout. Good job!
I really enjoyed I am Anxiety! I would say that the pacing could’ve been a bit slower but I liked the character a lot! It sort of sent my mind into a spiral which was AWESOME! Fantastic read overall.