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Hello Amanda!
Very nice reads! They each had a different tone, and you varied your pitch where needed. The pacing was good, as well. The only thing I would tell you to be mindful of is micro pauses not intended in the script. I noticed this in your third copy, but you did a great job tackling it! Keep it up!
Kathy
Hi Amanda!
I am a beginner as well! Many of us here are. All feedback is welcome and appreciated! I always knew that pronunciation varies depending on what part of the US you are from, but hearing it here is a new experience! I am working on this, as well as enunciation, so my readings come out clear. The word “integral” did stand out, as did “aspect”.
Thank you!
– Kathy
You’re getting there, Mary! I heard a more natural, relaxed, delivery through the whole read! Keep it up! Good job!
Kathy
Hello everyone!
Here a script for Acadia National Park from the Tours/Travelogue section in the script library.
Still struggling with “an” on some occasions… overall how was the pace, and pronunciation?
All feedback is welcome and appreciated!
Thank you! — Kathy
Acadia National Park
Among the many aspects of natural beauty in Acadia National Park is the view of the starry night sky, which provides stunning views of the Milky Way to thousands of visitors.
The natural night sky is an integral part of the park, an element of cultural heritage, and a source of inspiration for visitors.
Thanks for the feedback, Mary!
I understand what you are saying in regards to the app, i.e. natural vs. robotic.
I think Siri and Alexa are stuck in my head —- and I don’t use them! lol
I’ll give it another go, and see how it comes out.
Thanks again!
Kathy
Hi Mary!
After listening, I felt like you sounded more relaxed, natural, during this part of your script:
Color Street offers a vast array of colors and nail art design, direct to Independent Stylists and ultimately to clients. These stunning nail polish strips keep their good looks up to 10 days, and they’re easy to remove with any nail polish remover.
In this section, your pitch also emphasized important words. There was a little slight pause between “stylists and”, but otherwise this section had a great delivery.
I hope this helps. Keep it up!
Kathy
Hello jmtarleton!
I did not know you read the Telsa script until after I uploaded my read. Your tone and delivery, I felt, was spot on. Just be careful of lip-smacks at the end of some of your words. Overall, good job!
Kathy
