kevinwiland
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Hello again,
Any/all feedback is welcome!! Right now, I am just working on my technique. Please ignore any recording software issues.
Script: The Library of Congress was established by an act of Congress in 1800 when President John Adams signed a bill providing for the transfer of the seat of government from Philadelphia to the new capital city of Washington. It was housed in the new Capitol until August 1814, when invading British troops set fire to the Capitol Building, burning and pillaging the contents of the small library. Within a month, retired President Thomas Jefferson offered his personal library as a replacement. Jefferson had spent 50 years accumulating books and his library was considered to be one of the finest in the United States.
Hi everyone,
This is my first post in the forum. I am a beginner and am in the Edge Studio program. All feedback is welcome.-
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Aetna/US Healthcare
No matter where we live–when it comes to something as important as health care–we all want the best. That’s why AETNA and US HEALTHCARE have joined forces to create a partnership that will set a new standard for quality and caring. AETNA and US HEALTHCARE. Raising a standard for your town, for your family, and for you.Amber, very nice job! Your voice seems very relaxed. It feels to me that your pitch didn’t vary much, other than the first sentence. Was this intentional?
Katelyn,
I think this is awesome! I love your voice and I can’t decide what I like better. My favorite part is when your voice becomes more “airy” on the word “endless.” Great job. Hope you get the gig!Hello Lexi! I am a beginner, so please take my feedback with a grain of salt. =)
I really like the warmth to your voice. My favorite part was, “this video is for and about you.” It really drew me in the way you emphasized “you.”
I was a little bothered by your pronunciation of “Social”. It sounds like “Soh-sul” instead of “Soh-sh-ul”, with an “sh” sound.
Otherwise, nice job!
