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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #57280
    katelyndawnvo
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    Thank you! I’m going to start uploading changes as per people’s suggestions otherwise I won’t really learn. I think this one sounds better and I took your direction 🙂 THank you!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57274
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hehe! I loved this. Wow what a variety of voices you have. This was great!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57272
    katelyndawnvo
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    Nice work. You have a nice voice for this type of content. I would say you may want to work on pronunciation as there were some words that were slurring together a bit, particularly on the line “To see if you can take advantage of this free service;” Sometimes when I have a hard time with slurring I put a pen between my teeth and say the phrase slowly trying to say each work – it was a suggestion on the vocal health or technique webinar. Keep it up!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57262
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hi ladies and gents! Here is another read. I normalized it to about -3db. Got a new interface with a bit less self-noise than my focusrite. Anyways. I appreciate any feedback.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57261
    katelyndawnvo
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    isabrandon30 – Nice work here. I like your warm relaxing tone. Seems like a good tone of voice for eLearning. Very welcoming and non-threatening. Great recording quality as well. There was only one part that I thought you could come at with a slightly bit of different energy. You picked up the energy at the end a bit and I heard a sparkle in your eye and a smile in your voice, but I thought the line “humorous bit of wisdom” could use a bit more sparkle here as well just to break it up so it doesn’t sound too much the same throughout. Nice job!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57213
    katelyndawnvo
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    Thanks for any feedback! 🙂

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57212
    katelyndawnvo
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    For Docr15 – Cute! I like this read! I think there might be slightly too long of a pause between “what can ____ (pause) like a ____”. Maybe more of a micropause vs. a true pause would work better. Nice audio quality and nice job on this performance!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #57211
    katelyndawnvo
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    Lol you’re so right… HUNDERED!!!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #56790
    katelyndawnvo
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    Hey Docr15 – On the Karibui coffee piece: I thought you did a nice job overall on the production. It sounded as though you had some pauses in unnatural places. It took me out of the read, and a bit of saliva noise. My coach mentioned that eating a piece of apple can help with this. I want to try that out myself. 🙂 Nice work! Keep it up.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #56788
    katelyndawnvo
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