[jasjol71]

Great advice, Chris. I appreciate that! Thanks for listening!

[jasjol71]

Thanks, Amber. I appreciate that. I should have mentioned I don’t have a decent studio setup yet! Just recording on a USB mic from my office on campus. Thanks for pointing out how important that is. I can definitely hear the breaths too… oops! Thanks again!

[jasjol71]

Hello, everyone! I’m Jason. Working on a narration demo. These are from a couple of scripts I sourced. One is a mindfulness/meditation script (not my forte, since I have never meditated!), and the other is an audio guide for a Frank Lloyd Wright house. I look forward to your suggestions, and thanks in advance!

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[jasjol71]

Really enjoyed this read. Your tone is reassuring, which is what I sure the client would want. Sounded very professional to me!

[jasjol71]

I like your voice. I agree with some of the earlier comments about it sounding a bit choppy, but I thought it got more and more natural as it progressed. One small thing about making it sound more natural/conversational: maybe make “we are” the contraction “we’re” — might help smooth it out!

[jasjol71]

Michelle, I liked the energy and the inflections in your voice!

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