[irvj]

Totally agree with BrianWigginsVO. I hear this, I see this ad on the tube. I liked the way you changed pitch, it gave a more conspiratorial feel, like, “just between us”…Great job!

[irvj]

Thanks for the feedback swy619. I’ll put that in to play!!

[irvj]

Just trying a promo type of read. Would welcome feedback regarding delivery as well as audio quality.

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[irvj]

Hi Sarania, I thought your tone was great. I liked the use of inflection. One thing that caught my ear was in the first line, you sort of combined “is an” together and then it occurred again in the second line with “in a 1945 survey”. I might be nitpicking here but in the 3rd line, “Company executives decided to use the signature of “Betty Crocker” on the prize letters–Betty because…” a short pause after the second Betty to emphasize her name. Just a thought. Great read otherwise!

[irvj]

Loved your voice! I thought the recording sounded clean. I wish I could have heard something from your previous recording space as a comparison.

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