[ierxyzz]

I really like how you emphasized each thought. This feels fitting for the adverts I see like this

[ierxyzz]

Hey Joseph, you have great diction here. I understood everything perfectly. I agree with mike about breaks between words, especially in your Brinox read. Great reads!

[ierxyzz]

Happy new year, everyone! For these practice reads, I’m working on avoiding up-talk and shortening the pauses between lines to keep the flow sharp and engaging. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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Hi all, this is a commercial copy read for Trendi.com. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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I like your flow! And I can understand your enunciation well. For Medical-script, “patient records and appointments” ran together a little bit for me. Maybe either slowing that part down a hair or changing the pitch a little more between them would help me process the information better. Great stuff!

[ierxyzz]

Hi all, uploading these 2 reads before my upcoming coaching session. This is my first time using the De-Clicker tool, and I think it went well. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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Thanks! I hear what you’re saying about less emphasis. That’s a good adjustment

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Hi all! Uploading these 2 commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session. This is my first time playing around with EQ to affect the tone of a piece. I emphasized the highs of the Sesame Place read, and the mids/lows of the Toyota read. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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Hi everyone! I recently began commercial coaching with edge. This is my first crack with the home studio. Any feedback would be helpful. Thanks!

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