Hazaro
Forum Replies Created
-
Replies
-
I liked the 3rd take best but think you could slow it down a hair and give the words a bit more weight. 😉
Great job on these! One tiny thing I would say (something I’ve done myself) is not to break up a word into syllables for the sake of clarity. It was only once in the first Brit-tain. Your clarity is already there and these both sounded great IMO!
Thank you for that. I try to gauge how long the spot might be, but realize I might be editing a bit too tightly!
You capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.
Hi Raven. Your clarity, tone and inflection are all there, great job on that. It does sound a bit forced however, I think if you can connect to the material and personalize it more, it would really elevate it to sound more natural.
These are good reads cammons01, very natural! The last “Today” on Lowes felt a bit like a shrug but I’m guessing you didn’t mean it that way 😉
These were great for your first go! If you’ve been struggling with mouth sounds then your practice has paid off as your enunciation sounded great! You can work on making the material more personal and specific as you keep moving forward. Great job!
The Tire spot sounded the best overall in tone, pacing and clarity. Very natural! (I think the disclaimer gets sped up if needed in post, though you can clearly do fast! LOL)
Really liked your tones for Crayola and Beringer. I would say just to be careful as some words sounded rushed rather than inflected, and then got lost. Tennessee Whiskey felt a bit disconnected – it’s anthem writing style not the most conversational to begin with. Maybe you can try responding to someone asking the question “But where are you born from?” to see if that might help the flow of it.
