[Gill]

Hi Glen,

You have a nice strong voice, and you hit client’s names really well. I would be careful with over projecting. Also, your pace is a little too fast so just be mindful of that.

[Gill]

Hi Brad,
I’m not sure if its the way the file is saved but I’m not able to play your recordings

[Gill]

Yes, that is my bad editing, I’m working on it thanks for the feedback!

[Gill]

Rusty,
Nice relaxed reads. I like your tone, and emphasis, the pace is good for both. I heard a little buzzing as you spoke but I think that is more audio.

[Gill]

Robert,
I really like your Aetna read, I think you really hit the emotional aspect of it. For jiff, I would slightly increase the pace. For the real estate, would you like to buy a house sounds really exaggerated, there’s also some emphasis on words that change your delivery.

[Gill]

Hi everyone, would appreciate your feedback on my reads, pace, tone, etc… I’m still a-little congested please ignore thanks!

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[Gill]

I like your tone, noticed your change in inflection, I think the pace could be a little faster.

[Gill]

Thanks so much for your feedback!

[Gill]

Rusty,
Nice read on script 1 it was very engaging, pace and tone were great! For script 2 it was alittle difficult the hear the client’s name.

[Gill]

Hi
I thought the depreciation read was good and I wanted to listen to more. The Valley park could use alittle more excitement like you want to get kids happy and excited to visit and Plastic narrative could use some emphasis on why it’s important to go plastic free.

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