[Gill]

Welcome!
I agree with TimberTykes, but also wanted to add to be mindful of your diction when you say words like important and create just make sure they are clear and not cut short.

[Gill]

Hi Lance medical reads are tough. Your diction is great, proliferation sounded a little out of place .

[Gill]

Thanks TimberTykes, I appreciate your feedback!

[Gill]

Hi Tracy
I would work on the flow and tone of both read and see how it sounds after.

[Gill]

Hi Max,
For lowe’s a little variation with the first three lines would enhance your read and I would just be mindful of your diction on website greeting where you say could have sounds like could of overall nice pace and tone.

[Gill]

Jeff,
You picked a couple of scripts that really highlights your voice well. I liked your natural voice in advil, your pace and diction are good too but I sort of felt you were putting it on for the chevy script. I think your natural voice would work just fine for chevy.

[Gill]

Hi Everyone,
I’m back with some more practice scripts! I’m working on flow and diction and would love your feedback! Thanks…

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[Gill]

Chole, your read is really engaging, I wanted to hear more. I think you did a great job changing your flow.

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Caryn, your voice is very soothing. I agree with Joel’s comments on your diction, but wanted to add that it sounds like you sort of have an accent when you say “themselves” like selves drags on maybe southern so i would be aware of that if you’re trying to stay neutral.
Your pace could slightly be a little faster

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[Gill]

Hi,
I like your dublin read you have good diction, tone and pace. i would just be mindful of your pauses.
Your flow at the end of hersey sounds like you’re getting excited for it but maybe that enthusiasm can be brought to the beginning. i would also be mindful of your pronunciation of idyllic.

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